Tuesday, March 24, 2015

NEW PLOT wip

--PRODUCTION CREDITS

--BLACKSCREEN, LIGHT COMES ON TO SHOW DOOR, FIGURE APPEARS, OPENS DOOR, WALKS IN ROOM WITH BLOODIED SHEETS ON FLOOR, SETS BAG DOWN IN FRONT OF THEM

--MATCH ON ACTION TO POV, TRACKING SHOT FROM BEHIND (HANDHELD), TRYING TO DIAL NUMBER BUT NO BATTERY, ‘SHIT!’

--CLEANER STOOPS IN FRONT OF CORPSE (FOOTSTEPS COME INTO VIEW/CAM ON FLOOR), PEELS AWAY BLOODIED SHEET
--MATCH ON ACTION MID SHOT CORPSE FACE, PUTS SHEET BACK OVER FACE

--CAMERA INSIDE BAG, MATCH ON ACTION TO SIDE SHOT PUTTING ON MARIGOLDS, EXTREME CLOSE UP GLOVES TWANGING?

--ACTOR RUNS INTO SHOT OF PAYPHONE OVER THE SHOULDER
--MATCH ON ACTION MID SHOT OF FACE, PANTING, RELIEF
--MATCH ON ACTION TRACKING SHOT FROM BEHIND OF THEM WALKING TOWARDS IT
--MATCH ON ACTION CAMERA INSIDE PAY PHONE AND ACTOR SQUEEZING IN, PUTTING MONEY IN, PICKING UP PHONE, TYPING IN NUMBERS

--LOW ANGLE POV OF CORPSE, MAN COMING CLOSE WITH SAW THEN STOPS AS --PHONE RINGS, STANDS UP, PICKS OUT PHONE FROM POCKET, HIGH ANGLE SHOT OF ACTOR PUTTING PHONE TO EAR ‘KARAM CLEANING SERVICES, HOW MAY I HELP YOU?’

--MID SHOT, FACE OF PAY PHONE USER VIDEO ‘JO, GET OUT OF THERE.’

--DEEP SHOT CLEANER ON PHONE, FOREGROUND PEELS OFF RAG AND BEGINS TO SIT UP
--MATCH ON ACTION TO THEIR FACE. NOT A ZOMBIE; AMUSED. LINGERS AS PHONE ARGUMENT CONTINUES, THEN BEGINS TO STAND, MATCH ON ACTION LOOSENING TIE

--OVER SHOULDER CLEANER FACING CAMERA AS KILLER APPROACHES
--BIRD'S EYE IF MANAGEABLE OR SIDE SHOT OF STRANGLE

--MATCH ON ACTION LINE GOING DEAD, BOOTH ACTOR LOOKING DISTRESSED, EVENTUALLY HANGS UP


SCREEN GOES BLACK ‘TWO DAYS AGO’ 

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